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RE Quest: Twisted Rhyme by ~Enskie:iconEnskie:



In the Treetop
Baby is there
What is she doing?
Does anyone care?
Where is her mother
And why is she gone
She’s sitting at home
With Whiskey and Rum
©2008-2009 ~Enskie
:iconenskie:

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For the RawEm0tion Quest: Put your own twist on a children's story or poem. Enjoy

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:iconoff-the-wallxcrazy:
This is a little sad.

But I like it...
:iconenskie:
Yeah, I was going for sad/neglected. So I'm glad that you liked, thank you a lot for the favourite, it was very much appreciated.

--
Love or Hate
Anger or Sate
Feel the soothing lotion
Of our combined =RawEm0tion

The consciousness of being at war, and therefore in danger, makes the handing-over of all power to a small caste seem the natural, unavoidable condition of survival.
:iconxxlonesomedovexx:
I like it. Very nice.

--
it was a bad day. the sun exploded;
the earth roiled and tore entire cities asunder;
the bus in front of my car crashed violently and everyone died;
i ran out of green tea.


~ ohsostarryeyed :sun:
:iconsnipingqueen:
It's really good. Definate feeling of neglect...:(

--
Whether you believe in talking or fighting for your cause, just make sure you're the one who comes out in one piece.
:iconoff-the-wallxcrazy:
You're very welcome.

--
And Jesus said to Abraham, "Check check." And Abraham so replied, "I'm getting a little hiss-back, let me turn down the volume."
:iconquarab58:
Very nice. I love it.
Very sad, though. :[

--
-Sarah-

"I grip the wheel and all at once I realize:
(And you're getting away...)
My life has become a boring pop song
And everyone's singing along."
- "I'm Ready" by Jack's Mannequin
:heart:

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